SUNY Geneseo Department of Mathematics
Fall 2023
Prof. Doug Baldwin (he/him/his)
Last modified August 21, 2023
Time and Place: TR 12:30 - 1:45 PM, South 336
Final Meeting: Tuesday, December 19, 12:00 - 2:30 PM
Instructor: Doug Baldwin
Office: South 307
Phone: 245-5659
Email: baldwin@geneseo.edu
Office Hours: Any time Monday through Friday, 8:00 AM to 5:00 PM, when I’m not committed to
something else. See my Google
Calendar for details of when I’m free and to make appointments
electronically. You don’t need to make appointments to see me, but I recommend
it in order to be sure I’ll be available. I find that office hours are most
effective when they’re in-person in my office, but if you need to, I’ll be
happy to meet in other ways or places. Finally, office hours don’t need to be
just about this course — feel free to come see me any time you have something
you’d like to talk about.
Online Course Materials: https://mylearning.suny.edu/d2l/home/793724
Welcome to “Writing Seminar,” a title that perhaps suggests you’ll get nothing out of this course if you already write well. Fortunately, I have another interpretation in mind. Although this course is centered on writing, it’s more about what and why people write than it is about how to write. So while we might spend some time on things like how to state a thesis, the real purpose of the course is to change the way you think about writing: to think of, and practice, it as a tool for refining ideas, whether those ideas are ultimately meant for others or just for yourself. And this view isn’t just about writing, it works for language in any form. Thus, I also hope that we’ll have a lot of conversations in this course, as places to explore both other people’s ideas and your own — maybe before writing, maybe afterwards, during, or even without writing at all.
Of course, it’s hard to have ideas without them being about something. We will therefore use secret codes as a context for thinking, writing and discussing. Much of this activity will actually deal with issues surrounding the codes in our readings rather than with the codes themselves, although we’ll also look at some of the history, mathematics, and technology of cryptography.
Learning Outcomes: On completing this course, you should be able to…
By achieving the above learning outcomes, you will also fulfill Geneseo’s “Basic Communication” general education requirement, namely that students will…
This is a face-to-face course. That means that class meetings, office hours, etc. will be in person as much as possible, although it doesn’t rule out occasional online activities.
Learning will happen and be supported in a number of ways in this course, including readings, homework, discussions, lectures, meetings, and online class notes. You will get the most out of the course if you engage with all of these things. However, there’s enough overlap between them that if you can’t do one, especially if it’s only for a limited time, you can probably make up for it by working a little harder with the others. So if, for example, you have to miss some class meetings for illness or family emergencies, don’t panic! You should still be able to participate and succeed in the course through the other channels. Naturally, not engaging with enough of the course will eventually lead to an unrecoverable situation, but the course format deliberately accomodates occasional situations in which you can’t do everything.
We will read the following works in this course. Some are available online, and others in print. I have given URLs for the online readings below. The print ones are available from the College bookstore and other sources.
Edgar Allan Poe, The Gold Bug Available online in The Works of Edgar Allan Poe at http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/2147 (easiest to read) or http://www.archive.org/details/worksedgarallan00markgoog (greater variety of formats).
Robert Harris, Enigma Available in print
Hugh Whitemore, Breaking the Code Available in print
The (required) writing manual is
Graff & Birkenstein, They Say, I Say (5th ed.); available in print.
Edgar Allan Poe’s “The Gold Bug” makes occasional use of the racial epithet “n----.” This word is an overt symptom of a much deeper racist thread running through much American entertainment, which we will look at in detail when we read the story. Until then, if you would prefer to read a version of the story in which the word is censored (as in the preceding sentence), you can find one at
https://www.geneseo.edu/~baldwin/intd105/poe_sanitized.html
Other supplemental readings that you may find interesting, and that I may assign at least parts of, are…
Descriptions and demonstrations of many classical cryptosystems:
https://www.simonsingh.net/The_Black_Chamber/chamberguide.html
An account of the portrayal of African Americans in American media:
https://black-face.com/
A technical description of the German Enigma cipher and techniques used to break it
https://www.codesandciphers.org.uk/enigma/index.htm
A short biography of Alan Turing
https://www.turing.org.uk/bio/part1.html
Class notes and exercises from last time I taught this course are online at
http://www.geneseo.edu/~baldwin/intd105/fall2021/course.php
I’ve organized this course around three essays that you will write. For each, you will write an initial draft, and then revise that draft. I’ll hand out detailed assignments for each essay as the time gets closer, but you can expect a similar course structure around each:
This organization leads to the following schedule for the semester.
Note that the following dates are best estimates. They may change as our actual needs become apparent. Refer to the Web version of this syllabus for the most current information; I will keep it as up-to-date as possible.
Aug. 28 - Aug. 31 | Introduction |
Aug. 31 - Oct. 5 | “The Gold Bug” and Substitution Ciphers |
Sep. 27 | Draft “Gold Bug” Essays Due |
Sep. 28 | Peer Edit “Gold Bug” Drafts |
Oct. 11 | Revised “Gold Bug” Essays Due |
Oct. 5 - Oct. 31 | Enigma and the Enigma Cipher |
(Oct. 9 - Oct. 10 | Fall Break) |
Oct. 18 | Draft Enigma Essays Due |
Oct. 19 | Peer Edit Enigma Drafts |
Oct. 29 | Revised Enigma Essays Due |
Oct. 31 - Nov. 30 | Breaking the Code and Alan Turing |
Nov. 13 | Draft Turing Essays Due |
Nov. 14 | Peer Edit Turing Drafts |
(Nov. 22 - Nov. 24 | Thanksgiving Break) |
Nov. 27 | Revised Turing Essays Due |
Nov. 30 - Dec. 7 | Modern Cryptography |
Grading in this course will be very different from what you are used to. The main reason for the unusual grading is that I am trying to consciously undo some of the small ways in which conventional grading unconsciously disadvantages certain students. But beyond removing disadvantages for some, I believe that what I am doing also offers significant advantages to everyone.
There are 3 main ways in which grading in this course will probably differ from what you have seen before.
The graded exercises in this course will mostly be writing exercises, and the handout for each will identify the learning outcomes that it addresses. I will give you a numeric grade for each outcome in an exercise, based on your goals and plans for the exercise, and the writing you do for it — in other words, the finished product matters, but is not the only, or even the main, determiner of your grade. Grades range from 0 to 3, as follows:
3 | Goals/plans and execution fully meet the learning outcome |
2 | Goals/plans meet the outcome, but execution falls short |
1 | Goals/plans and execution exist, but fall short of meeting the outcome |
OR Writing (execution) meets the learning outcome with little or no goal/plan | |
0 | No understanding of this outcome yet |
Although I will grade each exercise, mastery grading isn’t about how you do on any specific one. It’s about how well you’ve achieved outcomes by the end of the course. To that end, there are two other important points about exercises and their grades:
You will “turn in” each exercise by sharing your solution with me during one of your individual meetings. During that meeting, we’ll go over your solutions and answer any questions you have about them, and we’ll also discuss how you came up with those solutions and how you would approach similar problems.
Finally, when this course ends I will give you a letter grade for it based on the numeric grades. Specifically, I will add up your averages for each learning outcome, treat that total as a percentage of the maximum possible total (21 points), and use the following table to turn the percentage into a letter grade (but I reserve the right to adjust the cutoffs slightly to avoid people with nearly identical numeric grades getting different letter grades):
94 - 100 | A |
90 - 93.9 | A- |
85 - 89.9 | B+ |
75 - 84.9 | B |
70 - 74.9 | B- |
65 - 69.9 | C+ |
55 - 64.9 | C |
50 - 54.9 | C- |
Under 50, with effort | D |
Under 50, no effort | E |
Assignments in this course are fundamentally learning exercises. You are therefore welcome to help each other with them, unless specifically told otherwise in the assignment handout. However, solutions that you turn in must represent your own understanding of the solution and must be written in your own words, even if you got or gave help on the assignment.
Artificial intelligence is now widely available as a tool for lots of college-level work, and you may use it as you would use any other technology tool. But like any tool, you, as the human user, are responsible for everything you produce with it.
If you use sources other than this class’s textbook or notes in order to do an assignment, you must include a comment or footnote citing those sources in your solution. Similarly, if you get help from anyone other than me you must acknowledge the helper(s) somewhere in your solution. (But note that I generally think learning from outside sources and people is a good thing, not a bad one.)
I will penalize violations of this policy. The severity of the penalty will depend on the severity of the violation.
To foster a more inclusive, diverse, and safe space in this class, you have a right to express who you are in the classroom, in meetings, etc. This includes, but isn’t limited to, the right to speak, write, and think in the language forms or dialects you grew up with or identify in, the right to share your prefered name and/or pronouns if you wish and have others use them, etc.
Corresponding to your right to self-expression is a responsibility to exercise that right in ways that don’t limit others’ right to express themselves, nor their right to learn in a safe and welcoming environment.
The college provides a range of support services to help students thrive in their classes. Of these services, the one best suited to this course is the Writing Learning Center. For more information, including hours and procedures for scheduling a visit, see the WLC website at https://www.geneseo.edu/english/writing_center.
Also, the SUNY-wide STAR-NY system (www.starny.org/tutoring_schedule) provides online tutoring in a wide variety of subjects.
For more information on these and other academic support services, see the Academic Support Services website at https://www.geneseo.edu/academic-support-services.
SUNY Geneseo is dedicated to providing an equitable and inclusive educational experience for all students. The Office of Accessibility (OAS) will coordinate reasonable accommodations for persons with disabilities to ensure equal access to academic programs, activities, and services at Geneseo.
Students with approved accommodations may submit a semester request to renew their academic accommodations. Please visit the OAS website for information on the process for requesting academic accommodations.
Questions? Contact the OAS by email, phone, or in-person:
Office of Accessibility Services
Erwin Hall 22
585-245-5112
access@geneseo.edu
Under state law (Education Law, Section 224-a) students are excused from course requirements, such as examinations, class attendance, or other academic study and work requirements, for religious observance. You can make up any work missed in such circumstances without penalty. Geneseo’s complete policy on religious observances, with links to common holidays, is available at https://www.geneseo.edu/apca/classroom-policies.
Individuals on active military duty (including National Guard and Reserve service) are entitled to excused absences from classes during their period of service and will not be penalized in any way. See the College Bulletin for more on this policy.
If there is anything else I can do to make this class or its materials easier for you to access or use, please let me know.