SUNY Geneseo Department of Mathematics

INTD 105 10 — Writing Seminar: Secrets and Secret Codes

Fall 2023
Prof. Doug Baldwin (he/him/his)

Last modified August 21, 2023

Time and Place: TR 12:30 - 1:45 PM, South 336

Final Meeting: Tuesday, December 19, 12:00 - 2:30 PM

Instructor: Doug Baldwin
Office: South 307
Phone: 245-5659
Email: baldwin@geneseo.edu
Office Hours: Any time Monday through Friday, 8:00 AM to 5:00 PM, when I’m not committed to something else. See my Google Calendar for details of when I’m free and to make appointments electronically. You don’t need to make appointments to see me, but I recommend it in order to be sure I’ll be available. I find that office hours are most effective when they’re in-person in my office, but if you need to, I’ll be happy to meet in other ways or places. Finally, office hours don’t need to be just about this course — feel free to come see me any time you have something you’d like to talk about.

Online Course Materials: https://mylearning.suny.edu/d2l/home/793724

Welcome to “Writing Seminar,” a title that perhaps suggests you’ll get nothing out of this course if you already write well. Fortunately, I have another interpretation in mind. Although this course is centered on writing, it’s more about what and why people write than it is about how to write. So while we might spend some time on things like how to state a thesis, the real purpose of the course is to change the way you think about writing: to think of, and practice, it as a tool for refining ideas, whether those ideas are ultimately meant for others or just for yourself. And this view isn’t just about writing, it works for language in any form. Thus, I also hope that we’ll have a lot of conversations in this course, as places to explore both other people’s ideas and your own — maybe before writing, maybe afterwards, during, or even without writing at all.

Of course, it’s hard to have ideas without them being about something. We will therefore use secret codes as a context for thinking, writing and discussing. Much of this activity will actually deal with issues surrounding the codes in our readings rather than with the codes themselves, although we’ll also look at some of the history, mathematics, and technology of cryptography.

Learning Outcomes: On completing this course, you should be able to…

  1. Read significant texts carefully and critically, recognizing the author’s positions and claims
  2. Write sustained, coherent and effective essays responding to issues that arise from readings or discussions, in particular…
    1. Write arguments that persuade a reader of some claim (including a statement of an arguable claim, a valid argument for it, supporting evidence, and a conclusion that goes beyond restating the claim and argument)
    2. Write reflections — i.e., author’s reactions that don’t necessarily argue for a claim — on an issue (including the endpoint you reach, reasons for it, and implications for yourself or others)
    3. Revise arguments and reflections to improve their substance
  3. Use appropriate summaries, paraphrases, and quotations to incorporate, with proper credit, information gleaned through library research into writings
  4. Clearly state your positions, and understand those of others, in respectful verbal discussion of significant ideas
  5. Use language in ways that communicate both objective logic and emotional or personal tone from author to audience.

By achieving the above learning outcomes, you will also fulfill Geneseo’s “Basic Communication” general education requirement, namely that students will…

Teaching Mode

This is a face-to-face course. That means that class meetings, office hours, etc. will be in person as much as possible, although it doesn’t rule out occasional online activities.

Learning will happen and be supported in a number of ways in this course, including readings, homework, discussions, lectures, meetings, and online class notes. You will get the most out of the course if you engage with all of these things. However, there’s enough overlap between them that if you can’t do one, especially if it’s only for a limited time, you can probably make up for it by working a little harder with the others. So if, for example, you have to miss some class meetings for illness or family emergencies, don’t panic! You should still be able to participate and succeed in the course through the other channels. Naturally, not engaging with enough of the course will eventually lead to an unrecoverable situation, but the course format deliberately accomodates occasional situations in which you can’t do everything.

Books and Other Resources

Books

We will read the following works in this course. Some are available online, and others in print. I have given URLs for the online readings below. The print ones are available from the College bookstore and other sources.

Edgar Allan Poe, The Gold Bug Available online in The Works of Edgar Allan Poe at http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/2147 (easiest to read) or http://www.archive.org/details/worksedgarallan00markgoog (greater variety of formats).
Robert Harris, Enigma Available in print
Hugh Whitemore, Breaking the Code Available in print

The (required) writing manual is

Graff & Birkenstein, They Say, I Say (5th ed.); available in print.

Supplemental Materials

Edgar Allan Poe’s “The Gold Bug” makes occasional use of the racial epithet “n----.” This word is an overt symptom of a much deeper racist thread running through much American entertainment, which we will look at in detail when we read the story. Until then, if you would prefer to read a version of the story in which the word is censored (as in the preceding sentence), you can find one at

https://www.geneseo.edu/~baldwin/intd105/poe_sanitized.html

Other supplemental readings that you may find interesting, and that I may assign at least parts of, are…

Descriptions and demonstrations of many classical cryptosystems:

https://www.simonsingh.net/The_Black_Chamber/chamberguide.html

An account of the portrayal of African Americans in American media:

https://black-face.com/

A technical description of the German Enigma cipher and techniques used to break it

https://www.codesandciphers.org.uk/enigma/index.htm

A short biography of Alan Turing

https://www.turing.org.uk/bio/part1.html

Other Resources

Class notes and exercises from last time I taught this course are online at

http://www.geneseo.edu/~baldwin/intd105/fall2021/course.php

Course Schedule

I’ve organized this course around three essays that you will write. For each, you will write an initial draft, and then revise that draft. I’ll hand out detailed assignments for each essay as the time gets closer, but you can expect a similar course structure around each:

  1. Read and discuss the work that motivates the essay. I’ll probably hand out the essay assignment while we’re doing this.
  2. As you start drafting the essay, we’ll read, discuss, or otherwise study writing ideas or background material likely to help you with it.
  3. We’ll “peer edit” the drafts, i.e., each of you will read someone else’s draft in order to offer feedback on it.
  4. You’ll also meet with me to review your draft.
  5. Based on feedback from the peer editing and the meeting with me, and your own thinking about the draft, you’ll write a revised essay.
  6. While you’re revising, we’ll use class time to again talk about writing or other ideas that might be helpful.
  7. As or shortly after you finish the revision, we’ll study and try out the cryptography or other technical ideas referenced in the original reading.
  8. Finally, you’ll meet with me to talk about the revised essay.

This organization leads to the following schedule for the semester.

Note that the following dates are best estimates. They may change as our actual needs become apparent. Refer to the Web version of this syllabus for the most current information; I will keep it as up-to-date as possible.

Major course modules and activities
Aug. 28 - Aug. 31Introduction
Aug. 31 - Oct. 5“The Gold Bug” and Substitution Ciphers
Sep. 27Draft “Gold Bug” Essays Due
Sep. 28Peer Edit “Gold Bug” Drafts
Oct. 11Revised “Gold Bug” Essays Due
Oct. 5 - Oct. 31Enigma and the Enigma Cipher
(Oct. 9 - Oct. 10Fall Break)
Oct. 18Draft Enigma Essays Due
Oct. 19Peer Edit Enigma Drafts
Oct. 29Revised Enigma Essays Due
Oct. 31 - Nov. 30Breaking the Code and Alan Turing
Nov. 13Draft Turing Essays Due
Nov. 14Peer Edit Turing Drafts
(Nov. 22 - Nov. 24Thanksgiving Break)
Nov. 27Revised Turing Essays Due
Nov. 30 - Dec. 7Modern Cryptography

Grades and Such

Grading in this course will be very different from what you are used to. The main reason for the unusual grading is that I am trying to consciously undo some of the small ways in which conventional grading unconsciously disadvantages certain students. But beyond removing disadvantages for some, I believe that what I am doing also offers significant advantages to everyone.

Key Ingredients

There are 3 main ways in which grading in this course will probably differ from what you have seen before.

The Details

The graded exercises in this course will mostly be writing exercises, and the handout for each will identify the learning outcomes that it addresses. I will give you a numeric grade for each outcome in an exercise, based on your goals and plans for the exercise, and the writing you do for it — in other words, the finished product matters, but is not the only, or even the main, determiner of your grade. Grades range from 0 to 3, as follows:

General mastery rubric
3Goals/plans and execution fully meet the learning outcome
2Goals/plans meet the outcome, but execution falls short
1Goals/plans and execution exist, but fall short of meeting the outcome
OR Writing (execution) meets the learning outcome with little or no goal/plan
0No understanding of this outcome yet

Although I will grade each exercise, mastery grading isn’t about how you do on any specific one. It’s about how well you’ve achieved outcomes by the end of the course. To that end, there are two other important points about exercises and their grades:

You will “turn in” each exercise by sharing your solution with me during one of your individual meetings. During that meeting, we’ll go over your solutions and answer any questions you have about them, and we’ll also discuss how you came up with those solutions and how you would approach similar problems.

Finally, when this course ends I will give you a letter grade for it based on the numeric grades. Specifically, I will add up your averages for each learning outcome, treat that total as a percentage of the maximum possible total (21 points), and use the following table to turn the percentage into a letter grade (but I reserve the right to adjust the cutoffs slightly to avoid people with nearly identical numeric grades getting different letter grades):

How numeric grades translate to letter grades
94 - 100A
90 - 93.9A-
85 - 89.9B+
75 - 84.9B
70 - 74.9B-
65 - 69.9C+
55 - 64.9C
50 - 54.9C-
Under 50, with effortD
Under 50, no effortE

Working Together

Assignments in this course are fundamentally learning exercises. You are therefore welcome to help each other with them, unless specifically told otherwise in the assignment handout. However, solutions that you turn in must represent your own understanding of the solution and must be written in your own words, even if you got or gave help on the assignment.

Artificial intelligence is now widely available as a tool for lots of college-level work, and you may use it as you would use any other technology tool. But like any tool, you, as the human user, are responsible for everything you produce with it.

If you use sources other than this class’s textbook or notes in order to do an assignment, you must include a comment or footnote citing those sources in your solution. Similarly, if you get help from anyone other than me you must acknowledge the helper(s) somewhere in your solution. (But note that I generally think learning from outside sources and people is a good thing, not a bad one.)

I will penalize violations of this policy. The severity of the penalty will depend on the severity of the violation.

Students’ Right to Self-Expression

To foster a more inclusive, diverse, and safe space in this class, you have a right to express who you are in the classroom, in meetings, etc. This includes, but isn’t limited to, the right to speak, write, and think in the language forms or dialects you grew up with or identify in, the right to share your prefered name and/or pronouns if you wish and have others use them, etc.

Corresponding to your right to self-expression is a responsibility to exercise that right in ways that don’t limit others’ right to express themselves, nor their right to learn in a safe and welcoming environment.

Academic Support Services

The college provides a range of support services to help students thrive in their classes. Of these services, the one best suited to this course is the Writing Learning Center. For more information, including hours and procedures for scheduling a visit, see the WLC website at https://www.geneseo.edu/english/writing_center.

Also, the SUNY-wide STAR-NY system (www.starny.org/tutoring_schedule) provides online tutoring in a wide variety of subjects.

For more information on these and other academic support services, see the Academic Support Services website at https://www.geneseo.edu/academic-support-services.

Accommodations

SUNY Geneseo is dedicated to providing an equitable and inclusive educational experience for all students. The Office of Accessibility (OAS) will coordinate reasonable accommodations for persons with disabilities to ensure equal access to academic programs, activities, and services at Geneseo.

Students with approved accommodations may submit a semester request to renew their academic accommodations. Please visit the OAS website for information on the process for requesting academic accommodations.

Questions? Contact the OAS by email, phone, or in-person:

Office of Accessibility Services
Erwin Hall 22
585-245-5112
access@geneseo.edu

Under state law (Education Law, Section 224-a) students are excused from course requirements, such as examinations, class attendance, or other academic study and work requirements, for religious observance. You can make up any work missed in such circumstances without penalty. Geneseo’s complete policy on religious observances, with links to common holidays, is available at https://www.geneseo.edu/apca/classroom-policies.

Individuals on active military duty (including National Guard and Reserve service) are entitled to excused absences from classes during their period of service and will not be penalized in any way. See the College Bulletin for more on this policy.

If there is anything else I can do to make this class or its materials easier for you to access or use, please let me know.